Please rate my Deck. (yu-gi-oh)?

yeah i have to agree with her. you need more traps. you need defense offense and barriers and try to stick to a theme. i would try to get your deck to 40 cards use trap cards like magic cylinder, mirror force, shadow spell, ect. use offense like secret barrel, just desserts,monsters, giant trunade to open up the field, ect. and barriers that i use are 2-3 marauding captains, 2 command knights, so that they cant attack and you can stuff like that but it will be different with you cuz i have a warrior only deck so good luck hope i helped :)